Fripp Island, S.C. Vacation 2012

A trip to the beach is on the horizon again, and I realized that didn’t post photos from last year’s trip. What I look forward to the most is peaceful beauty of the island, Fripp Island, SC. This was sunrise at the beach. These are deer eating near the tennis courts. The island is a … Read more

Writing Update

This is a quick update on my writing efforts. A few weeks ago, I submitted a short story, The Curse of Rachael’s Crest, to the Loudoun County (Va.) Library’s writing contest. I worked on this story on and off for the last three years. Finally, I’m satisfied with how the ending plays. I’m preparing to … Read more

Good Stories in Comic Books

One of the benefits of comic books is that they allow for extensions of t.v. shows once it becomes too expensive for them to be produced in that medium. The truth of the matter is that after X years actors want a bump in their salaries. Oftentimes, actors become bored with their roles and they … Read more

Forging Freedom Press Release

Freedom Forge Press has issued a press release about their forthcoming anthology, Forging Freedom. The anthology, which includes my short story The Shape of Things to Come, is available for pre-order. I’m looking forward to September 17th.

The Ultimate Writer’s Critique

All writers face criticism eventually. Some of it is written, some oral. Some of it is presented positively, some harshly. But, I doubt anyone has seen a critique presently like this: What really happened isn’t that bad. My wife laid the story next to the stove. She started making supper and came to see me … Read more

True, But Too Strange for Fiction

Create a character, named Anthony Weiner who is a congressman. Have him take pictures of his genitalia and send them to young women. Have it become public because he made a mistake with Twitter. Have him resign. Already, the scenario sounds unrealistic because of his name. But, wait, there’s more… A year afterward, have him … Read more

Character Infodumps

Recently, in a weekly critique group that I belong to, I’ve seen several submissions where in the first few chapters, the author stops the story cold to provide description of a person, surroundings, or both. In one case, in the first chapter, the story stopped to get complete (multi-paragraph) backstories on six characters. Literally, we’re … Read more

Beach Deer

In 2008, I visited Fripp Island, SC. When there, I get up at sunrise and walk the beach. It so peaceful. And sometimes, I get surprised. This morning, several deer wandered on the beach and played in the surf. I was able to take several pictures without disturbing them. The above picture makes me think … Read more

Scene Comparison from Freedom’s Fires

I’m working on a new novel, tentatively titled  Freedom’s Fires. Below is a scene that occurs early on. It’s main goal is to introduce the primary protagonist, Ryan Freeman. He’ll be one of three protagonist characters that the story will explore deeply. The scene’s secondary goal is to further introduce the reader to current living … Read more

Elevator Pitch, Part 4 of ?????

Once again, I’m working on the elevator pitch to Shifting Mars’ Sands. The revision below more accurately reflect the contents of the story, hopefully highlighting the compelling aspects of it. Fresh off the end of her marriage contract, Gretchen Blake is unable to get archaeology work on Earth because her last dig leader refuses to … Read more