2016 Pennwriters Conference and My Novel
This year’s conference, held in Lancaster, PA, helped me address several aspects of my novel.
The first was my novel title. I’ve been unhappy with mine and have been searching for a new, better one. Originally, I started with The Shifting Sands of Mars. It’s a great title. I know because Arthur C. Clarke used it for one of his novels. Once I realized that, the title was out. Other titles I ran through are: Shifting Mars Sands, The Discovery, and After the Discovery. During Friday night’s Sci-fi/Fantasy Read and Critique, Mark Gottlieb (Trident Media Group) mentioned that he often finds a work’s title in the manuscript.
Allegiant (The Divergent Series)
Recently, I saw Allegiant in the theaters. The trailers tantalized me. It looked as if it were more straightforward sci-fi with more effects. Factoring in where the last movie ended, I expect at good time. . .
I Didn’t Write That. . . Did I?
Today’s game is called: Let’s find the horrible error!
This is how we play. Below is an excerpt of a chapter I wrote and edited. How quickly does the thought, “This author’s an idiot,” cross your mind?
Missing Civilization
Thursday, the compressor on my refrigerator/freezer died. Acting quickly, we (mostly my wife) salvaged most of the food by storing it in coolers outside.
#tbt Star Wars
This Polaroid picture was taken in 1977 or 1978, so I would’ve been around 11 or 12. Yeah, the original Star Wars (not the special editions) was ground breaking. And Han shooting first didn’t scar me..
#tbt Metal Shop
I made this in Metal Shop in 7th or 8th grade. As I recall, I created the mold in some sort of sand, poured the aluminum, and painted it.
Han Shot First!
In recent years, George Lucas has repeatedly stated that Greedo shot at Han first in the Mos Eisley cantina. He made this clear in the Special Edition of A New Hope.
This change is primarily why I hold that Special Edition up to ridicule.
Lucas’ justification is that he doesn’t want Han to be a coldblooded killer. I disagree with that characterization of Han. But, let’s put a pin in that for a moment.
Book Signing
On November 14, 2015, I participated in a book signing at the Purcellville Train Station sponsored by the Round Hill Writers Group. Most of the authors were supporting their book. For me, I was helping Dixie Hallaj, the owner of S & H Publishing, support her anthology Spies and Heroes where my story, Spying Isn’t … Read more